Ok, now something a bit more coherent than a keyboard smash!
I think its really difficult to write an even semi believable set up for this kind of scenario (50 shades, anyone?) but you have managed it really nicely. It didn't make me question why the hell this was happening, which I find really distracting, it just seemed to make perfect sense, under the circumstances.
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Date: 2013-08-05 09:06 pm (UTC)I think its really difficult to write an even semi believable set up for this kind of scenario (50 shades, anyone?) but you have managed it really nicely. It didn't make me question why the hell this was happening, which I find really distracting, it just seemed to make perfect sense, under the circumstances.
Ps did I say I love your dirty talk dialogue :)